Smile (Poem)

Smile (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer

I walk slowly down the hallway of my school, feeling lonely
I hear the chatter of my fellow class mates
They're laughing, teasing each other and even taking selfies
By accident, I come in one their selfies they claimed to "post" on Instagram 
They decide for me to take a groupie picture of them and then tell me to get lost
My fingers tremble, my vision get's blurry, I walk in a zigzag
I knock into my classmate, and he starts to swear directly at me 
"Move b****!" and pushes me away
I decide to go talk to Mrs. Smith, but she tells me to talk to a friend
The class gets louder and I try to act "cool" to get some attention
I do get attention, but not the one I was hoping for
I walk away and give up
Tears stream my face
Someone comes up to me and wipes the tears off my face
He gives me a wide smile and I too, give him one

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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I like how you take this person from being happy, through to feeling tense, through to being sad and then finally ending it on a happy note again.

I guess its all in a day fo some poor souls.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Lol thank you so much Mark!! :) it's really appreciated
Happiness can be contagious regardless of how bad one's situation may be. A genuine smile can sometimes say more than words ... this poem's a good reminder of that. Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston

PS: In the line "my vision get's blurry," the word "get's" does not need an apostrophe.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Aw the last line made me smile. :)
I like how you described the environment.
I can relate to it in a way. Keep up the good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on March 28, 2017
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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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