The World at Your Feet

Very, very random, and very, very weird!

The World at Your Feet                            

 

What if the world were about to fall

But of course, you didn’t care.

You and your blue lips,

You’re alone              

Alone in a world where nothings right.

Alone in a world where nothings wrong.

You’re alone.

You can go ahead and let the darkness swallow you.

And it will.

Because one day you’ll awake and the world will fall.

It will fall at your feet and look up at you.

But you drowned all in orange, and full to the brim

So full that your brain has just rolled right out.

So you do what you’d do and just kick it away.

Where it bounces to darkness, we all look at you,

You’re alone.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Markymark]

Well,

First off.....I like some abstraction. This is random words, up to the reader to try to interpret though. Your use and choice of words is good, and your grammar is as well. Since it's random, I cannot figure out the metaphor....if any was used. I'd like to read a work of yours with structure....meaning......not quite so off-the-cuff. I can tell you're a good writer.

Good write though....thanks for sharing.

Markymark

[LittleGlassWings]

Truely amazing! My sunshine got a way with words. :P

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"Because one day you'll awake and the world will fall.
It will fall at your feet and look up at you."

I liked these lines ... And i also liked the dark image in this write ..

[Amelie Poulain]

I like this poem a lot!! It really has alot of questions in it that are left un answered, they kind of float in your head afterwards!!!
I like it!!
maia