Endless

The merciless days,

they never just phase,

these ticking clocks

of humor and haste.

The oh so shy sun,

has been hiding too long,

from our cold backs,

dressed in black.

The musky green grass,

grows through the walls,

demanding the reason

for loneliness.

The lips I so long for

are dry and shut.

Just the words,

just the words I have,

scattered over the ceiling.

The music slows down,

as all of my heart,

sets sail to you,

and leaves me here.

Held in the cradle

of merciless days,

on musky green grass,

where no sun is dancing.

Be lonely with me,

so that together,

we are lonely,

but not alone.

Reviews

[VinoVenitas]

this was a really beautiful piece, I liked the last lines that made the piece into one whole. Nicely written keep it up

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Where there is loneliness, there is time to long for that which our heart's desire...You have captured the beauty of loneliness. Excellent ending, nice last stanza! Well penned.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Beautiful poem, really beautiful!!

[symmetryAsymmetry]

I do not want to leave a comment here because I think it is does not fit me to comment on such great poetry...but I also don't want to leave without letting you know just what you've achieved...congratulations!

[Antonio Valentino]

"Be lonely with me,

so that together,

we are lonely,

but not alone."


Ari my love, that is the most beautiful piece of verse I've, felt, let alone read I think ever..

I think you just summed up my life, in four short lines

(((You, Always)))