SHE MADE ME FEEL DIFFERENT

THE ONE WHO CHANGES YOUR LIFE

When life seemed to be punishment,

She made me feel different.

On my wounds was no ointment,

She made me feel different,

From hot sun to weather pleasent,

She made me feel different.

From single penny to millions achievement,

She made me feel different.

From sucked orange to boy decent,

She made me feel different.

From still to energetic movement,

She made me feel different.

Lust turned into love innocent,

She made me feel different.

In expressing love,I found myself reluctant,

She made me feel different.

Death was only the requirement but,

She made me feel different.

To inner beauty from from physical appearance,

For her,my heartily sentiments,

She made me feel different.

Giving a room in her heart basement,

She made me feel different.

I could not find her replacement because,

She made me feel different.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

I rather like this poem. The repetition of ' she made me feel different' is like the cord in a string of beads ... holding it together. You celebrate the wonder when someone comes and changes one's life for the better. Nicely done.