Red Dawn

One hero dies, another must rise!

Red Dawn

One hero dies,

Another will rise.

Like the phoenix,

From the ash.

Two destinies,

Must clash.

The blade,

Is drawn.

At the mornings,

Red dawn.

Author's Note

Hmmmm, What do Ya'll think?

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is very descriptive for a short piece and this is a very deep realistic piece of writing. One hero may die but on the other side a hero rises.

[.SaveSydney!.]

Nice rhyming;
All in all, really powerful, especially for such a short poem.
I'm really enjoying your writing so far!
Great job. :D

[James Watts]

Having a hard time understanding the part with the Phoenix. I always understood the rise of the Phoenix as a representation of new life begin anew or as more interesting meaning it was to represent the downtrodden overcoming oppression. Other than that, not a bad piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. It feel like a beginning to a story of a rise to power. The feel of battle is strong in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shay33]

I like the similie with the Phoenix. :)
Nice write.

[the_stoic]

one hero is dying while another is rising .. nice thought .. but wonder what happens with villains !! none of them dies and they keep on growing :D

[Rhine Wolf]

Now that was good! Truly! Blessed be, Fallon

[NinjaPi]

Nice. and nice ryhmes scheme. I understand Berry.

[zappy]

wow i like it

[ShaneBerry]

Randy's Princess-well, poetry has a different meaning for everyone, for me, this resembles honor and the cycle of life.