A Hundred Million Suns

A Hundred Million Suns

A Poem by ShaneBerry
"

a poem about someone who did me very wrong a few years back...

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A Hundred Million Suns


I don't know,

What words I could say

to make you think my way....

I walked up to you house in the bitter cold,

just to be the one that those warm arms would hold.

But now I see you found another man to take your breath away!

Well don't worry honey your gonna have it your way!

      Cause like a hundred million suns,

I will come undone,

and as you watch him run,

know.

I'm like a hundred millions suns.


You say it was a mistake,

you plead me to stay,

well sorry honey,its not gonna work like that today!


       Cause like a hundred million suns,

I will come undone,

and as you watch him run,

know.

I'm like a hundred million suns.


Burning like the fire in my eyes,

all I want is to see him die.

Burning like the hatred in my soul,

My broken heart...

you know, the one you stole.


         And like a Hundred million suns,

I will come undone,

and he will run,

and you will be there.

Waiting for... the sun.

© 2010 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
you know who u r. hope yalll liked it

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This was raw emotion, we write some of our best in those states of minds.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was so good! Made me a little sad though...been there and done that. You really do have a knack for words. Very deep too! ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very deep. It was like a confession or rant of sorts.
You've got a way with words, boy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Intense poem. A lot of pain I saw.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think its exellent , you put so much passion into it . Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderfully written & expressed

Posted 13 Years Ago


To be honest I'm not too sure that One Hundred Million Suns can come undone...
I walked up to "you" house should be your house.

Other than that it's a pretty decent piece.


Posted 13 Years Ago


nice..
this poem reads well..
good write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Passionate poem love!
Well crafted, great imagery too, cathartic, I hope?
Awesome
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow man awesome stuff. the title really struck me, particularly because Snow Patrol had an album with a similar title. lol. loved this a lot, and i like the fact you've vented everything into this poem. great work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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