Rant, "cold humanoid"

its self explanatory.

YOU ARE A COLD HUMANOID

Do you want to know what I really think about you now? After what you did to me? And the family, who took you in, gave you a roof over your head, and fed you for the past three years, do you honestly want me to tell you? you are Cold, Algid, Arctic, Bleak, Cutting, Calculating, Crisp, Dead, Emotionless, Far, Freezing, Frigid, Frigorific, Frore, Frosty, Frozen, Frosted, You ma’am are a Glacial, Inhuman  Monstrosity who had to have been created in a laboratory somewhere  specifically to ride every last nerve in my body like a freaking pony! Because you Wintery Refrigerant of a woman, I can honestly say that you have taken the last five years of my life, and frozen them over with your icey, icey, evil, disguised as kinky awesome sex and love, but in truth, like a viper, you waited for the very last second you could, and you bolted, when you come back, be sure to wear your magical hat there Snow white frosty w***e, Because none of us will watch your singing and dancing show without it. Goodbye, have a nice life.

Author's Note

yeah, i have a few more rants i will be posting lol

Reviews

[tynamite]

Hmmm.

[J. R.]

You've stated you mind very eloquently. A very entertaining rant.

[Shante Payne]

Well you told her! I love the part where you tell her what you think cold, frosty, far...haha that added so umph! great write I enjoyed it.

[Poetic Beauty]

Whom this piece is written is about, sounds like they have done some really horrible things to make you feel this way. Writing about these emotions is a great way to get it off your mind and let it out in a positive manner. YOu have clearly stated just how cold hearted and Ice Queenish this person is.

[Michael X]

"cold humanoid" that is the absolute behind the poem. brilliant.
Cold, Algid, Arctic, Bleak, Cutting, Calculating, Crisp, Dead, Emotionless, Far, Freezing, Frigid, Frigorific, Frore, Frosty, Frozen, Frosted, "

wow this poem is all around mind-sweeping, it is truly eclectic.
reasl and well defined, has a hip-techno visualistic nuance approach
that really works. I am amazed :)

[Undying Glory]

i winced as i read this one. good rant man, and it sure is a great way to let everything out. nice job

[StacyPerry]

Dug the rant. Everyone needs to rant at some point

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Rant away that does help get thing's off our chest so we don't hold on to it and allow the hurt to make us suffer i know i always feel better when i do that and let it go. Very Harsh Hope all is well Many blessings lily

[Cassiopia Summers]

Icy and harsh, but oh so great!

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ice cold rant..