Goodbye is not always bad, (It’s the Loneliness that makes it Seem that Way)

Goodbye is not always bad, (It’s the Loneliness that makes it Seem that Way)

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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sometimes it just needs to be said

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Goodbye is not always bad, (It’s the Loneliness that makes it Seem that Way)


The gleaming shine of my Cell phone screen wakes me up from a soft dream of love,


With depressing texts, reminded me of the past you cannot let go of.


What would be so different this time as it was before?


Think of the past that I abhor.


Shattering my veins, with dark blue blood, pumping from frustration like it did before!


I’m sorry girl but I do not love you like I did, anymore.


And I know that it is sad, but goodbye is not always bad,


I know one day soon you will be glad.


We will always know of the times we had,


But for now it’s goodbye, and for a while it will feel so sad.

© 2011 ShaneBerry


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This is a sweet and yet sad poem… Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great, too bad few people see this

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is good. It's kind of hard to follow, but the rhymes are good and not forced, and your words are strong. Good job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this from a male's point of view. It is gentle but gets the point across quite clearly. We have all had those moments. All of us have been the give and the receiver of messages like this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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