Somewhere In Time

Somewhere in Time

Days without your sweet face…

Pitying myself, and missing the sweet taste,

Of you kiss, your air, and your lips on mine.

Girl I would give anything, to see you one more time.

And then I give everything to see you one more time, again.

 

But I know it is true, that somewhere in time, I’m holding you watching asleep next to me,

And I am kissing your head as you dream in my arms.

Knowing that here you will feel no harm.

Now what can I do, to make somewhere in time, be here and now?

 

Pleas baby just tell me what can I do, to get me to you?

Hold you like in my dreams; share the love that so true!

How can I reveal, actions far louder than words, if you are not here, and I am not there, next to you.

 

But I know, somewhere in time, we in a grassy field, lying next to each other,

Thinking it’s too good to be real!

But SOMEHOW!

I want somewhere in time to be here right now…

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Many things, whether good or bad, happen for a reason. As will another event that'll make him realize his choices and actions of forcing you away were the wrong ones. Just wait patiently my friend, for the time will come when your time with Kayla will be bountiful in nature and you shall never be afraid again. Love is a wonderful thing, it's the most painful thing in many ways, yet it's the one thing that makes us feel so alive. By reading your poems about her I see your inner spirit, have no worries Dear. You'd be surprised on the good things happening right under your nose. :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

it didn't feel pushed to me I liked it I thought it was good

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. The flow and rhyme is not forced good.

[Dragon]

"Love can be magic...but magic can just be an illusion." (Got that quote from somewhere but forgot) In your poem, you really express your feelings for this girl and you obviously don't want your heart broken (again). Cherrish her as much as you can and hopefully, she'll do the same before it's too late. Show your love for her as much as you know you can. I hope you well.

7th (almost 8th) grade girl :)

[Art]

nice thoughts within your poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime need those desires of hope and time with the people we desire. I like the pace and the story in the words. Our wishes can become best days of a life when they become real. A excellent poem of love and hope.
Coyote