Victoria

Victoria

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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for my dear little sister Victoria Papan, i havent seen here, Niki holly OR Kayla in three weeks, this move is a nightmare...

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Victoria

 

Listen, Listen up.

This cup is filled up,

Time for another story of,

This  is for Victoria.

This girl so smooth,

She flows like the river through Peoria.

Words to describe her can be from Nympho,

To a deer hunter in the snow.

That seems a little choppy let me fix me flow,

One, two, three, ok now on with the show.

She’s got some anger problems; it’s something that we share,

Piss us off enough; it will start with a simple stare.

But let me warn you right off, just so you will know,

This crazy little thang; will turn you to a John Doe.

Rarest of the rare, coolest in the snow,

Quid pro quo.

This girl always answers back,

You give her any s**t and she will give you sassy smack.

You better clench those a*s cheeks boys if she shouts ATTACK!

Cause she gots a crazy mind,

Ask her to be normal and she will have to disincline.

You stab her back,

And she will pay you back in kind.

Stab her in the front?

She will rape you from behind.

Oh no, looks like I just made a rape joke,

Oh well at least I said something didn’t f*****g choke.

This girl can turn a normal phrase

Pervert it into a sick a*s joke,

Great at the wheel, smoothest drive,

This girl is probably drowning in her pride.

Takes care of her own, this girl owns her stride.

Side to side, front to back, I spit this spat of, without any lack of,

Words to say I keep this flow from strayin,

Off the track, trip ta pistol whip ya,

In the face this girl don’t use no mace Nah.

She a, hard balla with her chain saw,

Can use a gun, bow and b***h that aint all.

She can field dress a deer phat,

So in case ya didn’t hear that,

Let me reiterate for the last time,

Got no problem with blood or intestines.

Crazy a*s hoe gonna slice you up,

Pack you up; put ya in the back of her Boyfriends truck,

Dry you out and turn ya into jerky.

Cops avoid her cause she the cute kind of quirky.

One sister of my three, the one who started the story of,

Hanging with you three is a calm plutonic euphoria

Don’t eva forget that I love ya Victoria.

© 2011 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
i want yalls honest opinions on my raps. this one was for Tori, i fucking miss her soo much! she Nikki and Holly where like my little shoulder angels who helped me go on with my day :/ it sucks not being able to see them at all.... first poem i have ever written for Tori hope she likes it hahha love ya little sis!!

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It is a great story and a great tribute to a good friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A nice pace and interesting tale in the poem. Rap is like all thing. It is language. I like how you built on each statement making the poem a pleasure to read. Thank you for outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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