lonesome.

lonesome.

A Poem by Crystal Autumn
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I took a step outside,
the couples and lovers, i eyed.
Holding hands, with kisses so sweet,
wishing my hands could meet,
others so easy to mistreat.
but i, i am off beat.
hoping my heart takes the backseat.
but, i know it never has,
never will,
because, as much as-
as I try or cry-
this is how i feel.
and i feel, like i always will.

© 2014 Crystal Autumn


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So sad yet amazing once again, I really like your writing style and you may already noticed.
another amazing piece . Continue the greatness that you are .
PS. I love how you end this 😊

Posted 9 Years Ago


sad but witty.. I do believe its about feeling alone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


In the simplest terms this explains a lot of us, love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Autumn

10 Years Ago

thanks so much, i'm in a pretty depressing place right now.
I just felt that expressing it, wo.. read more
SamueL

10 Years Ago

Keep ya head up! and your very welcome. :)

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Added on January 15, 2014
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Tags: lonely, lonesome, love, kisses, sweet, wish, plead, please help me

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