GIRL IN A TRAIN

My first ever poem, when i was fourteen...!

Hey! I missed my train

Ran behind it all in vain

Tired on my knees, I am breathless

I see no way out of this mess

On train, I wanna get back

Oh! M a helpless jack!

Of all the things I left I think

My mournful heart began to sink

I left my heart there

With a girl with black hair

Who had sat beside me all while

Came talking to me so many miles

She was a girl who belonged to bar

Was desperate to get from that life far

Bounded by those worldly chain

Seeking happier life she sat on train

I wondered how her heart was clear

Like a crystal, but had fear

Unpredictable future that lie ahead

How will she strife with hunger dead

She had a beauty of spring landscape

In her concise, there was nothing fake

To myself, a promise I made

I’ll help her till her past fade

When on station I got down

I ignored on her face a frown

With a promise to get back in an hour

I wandered street in search of a flower

Finally I found a beautiful rose

Felt overjoyed when scent stuck my nose

I imagined her smiling face

Rose in her hand, adding grace

My head swayed with rose in hand,

Platform was empty where I now stand.

Train, rose ,spring and the girl,

Together in my head began to whirl.

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

that was a wow!
that a one successful write.

[Vidushi Sharma]

srly? U dnt knw hw happie this makes me.! it was my first ever poem

[Laminators Dubai]

Yess!
I liked it a lot XD

[nibhz]

talented by birth! a good poem indeed!

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thanx di..!! lol!! ;)

[nibhz]

u r welcome! :P