Praise

what if He can hear you

everytime you say please...

what if He sees you

when you're down on your knees?

but tell me--

what if He cant?

what if He closes His heart, His mind

whether you give thanks or rant?

what then?

will you still send up a prayer?

will you still drop to your knees

if He might not be there?

will you still sing His praise

as you look up with tears on your face?

will you never swerve, in a hateful world

one that proclaims you a basket case?

one whose charts

the doctors throw away--

"There's no hope for this one..."

tell me then what you'll say.

what if He CAN hear you--

but chooses not to do a thing?

will you still lift your eyes to heaven

and praises to Him sing?

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Wow, this is incredibly impressive. What would would most of us really do.
I think there might a litttle 'doubting Thomas' in all of us.
I believe you did a supurb job in writing this poem. It is indeed, very thought provoking. Great write

Anne

[Vanessa Rico]

As Ladee Anne said, this is impressive and I am always glad to review your work, because it always amazes me! Keep up the good work!

[solo2be]

This is great, it really makes you think.