Winter or Summer?

Winter or Summer?

A Poem by PJ

Winter or Spring?

Spring flowers are not blooming yet,

Winter snow is not gone yet,

who knows, maybe it might never happen.

I miss running with my horse Chief and my dog Tucker in the spring.

The grass tickling our toes,

and the wind wispering how it will protect us from strangers.

My blond, thick, curly hair flows perfectly with the wind.

My laugh matches the chirps of the birds singing in the trees.

 At night how I sit on a blanket and loooking at the art of the stars, with my true love, Jess.

Laughing together like its Spring, but is it Spring?

Or is it Winter still?

The truth is that its niether Winter or Spring, its Sprinter! It is between Spring and Winter.

Is it Winter or Spring?  

© 2012 PJ


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I like poems about the seasons and the beauty of creation. I couldn't quite get a handle on the main subject or theme. Also, it looks like you used a different font or something for the last five lines. Overall, it's a fun poem that's easy to read.
Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I like poems about the seasons and the beauty of creation. I couldn't quite get a handle on the main subject or theme. Also, it looks like you used a different font or something for the last five lines. Overall, it's a fun poem that's easy to read.
Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem puts me in a happy mood for some reason, I've read it twice! I guess it's because I can imagine all of this through your writing great job!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow so much imagery in this write,
I really like that in a write.
I love the word Sprinter, awesome!
Very nicely written, you are very creative.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost perfect.
A beau;tiful scene
Sounds like summer is'
here. nicely done.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This one is one of my favorites too! It's about wanting spring to get here,but afraid it might not get here. Dont you get a great image of it? I can :) but if you think that i could do some final touces to do with it, just cmment and tell me. I wont care what you have to ay about it, good or bad. Your oppinion matters to me. So thanks and keep viewing and telling me what you think of them. Thank you so much guys! I appreciate it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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