Fire

Fire

A Poem by Shreyas Tripathy
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A song for inspiration, for unity

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Someday you will walk without a fear
Your hands in mine
Someday you will walk when the sky is clear
With a new world to design

You will reach the stars and touch the sky
You will let your heart reach out and fly ...
And there will be nothing left to make you cry
I won't let a tear ever fog your eye ...

When your darkest fears come alive
Your aspirations will fade away
But when life makes you struggle
Do not set fire to the hay

One day you will make it through
Close your eyes and look into
What's inside is the real you
A mirror which is always true...

Seems like its just another page
That you are tearing out of rage
Your feelings can't be kept inside
I'll always be there by your side

When your darkest fears come alive
Your aspirations will fade away
As life makes you struggle
Do not set fire to the hay

© 2012 Shreyas Tripathy


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wow nice wordz its a great piece of work

Posted 4 Years Ago


What a beautiful poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Inspiring and full of hope, even in the rough times

Posted 7 Years Ago


I did enjoy this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

Thanq !
Very nicely done. A wonderfully positive poem full of hope and encouragement.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

Thank you !
Wow, I really really REALLY liked this. I hate to say that it sounds better because it rhymed, but the rhyming really contributed to the piece. It was just so beautiful and moving. Great job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great job, dude. I really like this, keep up the great writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

Thanks Amanda !! I needed reviews badly :)
You're a life saver !
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Amazing piece...inspirational read...great work!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this is really beautiful and the rhyming seems effortless. What inspired this piece?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

I'm not sure ! But I sure am glad you liked it !!!

Gorgeous! I love what you did with this. There's just two things:
this line-" Your hands in my hand" I think it would sound better if you said " your hands in mine..." (just a suggestion) & then this line-" Close your eyes look into", It makes it seem like you cut off part of your line or stopped abruptly. It through me off a little bit. But other then that the poem is excellent.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review ! And thanks for the suggestion. The second flaw that you found, I actually mi.. read more
Shreyas Tripathy

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review ! And thanks for the suggestion. The second flaw that you found, I actually mi.. read more
CLUTZ

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, and that makes more sense. & I'm glad I could help

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Added on October 5, 2012
Last Updated on October 23, 2012
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Shreyas Tripathy
Shreyas Tripathy

Jaipur, India



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I am Shreyas Tripathy, a student who is pursuing engineering in the discipline, Computer Science Engineering. I have always had a creative side in me. Its just that i never had a platform or the.. more..

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