Again

Again

A Poem by iamshadowine

Why doesn't it stop? 
It showed itself up again So many cries, Such enmity,
 Why does it happen? Is it compulsory? 
Yes, the worst thing showed up,
 The only thing everyone fears,
 The only word with a devil, Called rumours.
 The cries, The worries, The taunts, Everything is there,
 But none to stand this time.
 Devils are so careless,
 They forgot it could take a life.
 I thought theft was a crime,
 But I was wrong, when I heard it was for need Never knew rumours were worse,
When heard that they were for greed. 
She cried
 And her wrists 
Blood stained.

© 2016 iamshadowine


Author's Note

iamshadowine
sequel of the poem: RUMOURS: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/iamshadowine/1702747/

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Words definitely hold a strong power, and rumors can cause incredible pain. What I think makes this poem stand out are the lines "Devils are so careless / They forgot it could take a life" and the contrast between the "crime" of theft for need and the crime of spreading rumors. The final three lines are also powerful. Nice work on this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you so much! :D
"It takes enough courage to live without a reputation," Gone with the Wind. Sure, words hurt and people are cruel or kind. It's up to us how we take it. These words will be a lesson and a blessing out of it. We learn from examples, but people also change. But in short, words aren't to be taken for granted and strewn around freely as they have a huge impact on people.

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you😊
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I like this.

"Devils are so careless,
They forgot it could take a life", this stays in my head.."


(I am actually writing something similar to this poem).


Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you 😊
The end sounds so emo xD Great poem though.

Small thing
But I was wrong, when I hears it was for need

Should be heard.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wølfy

7 Years Ago

But I will do it for free seeing as how you are so nice. :)
Wølfy

7 Years Ago

I just realized I made a typo xD I said hear when it should be heard. I blame physics.
iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

I blame the world 😂

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