Sunkissed

Sunkissed

A Poem by Shuchita

As I walked towards the sun,

It held me close,

Kissed me firm,

And left me sunkissed

© 2017 Shuchita


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This one gives me a warm feeling. A lovely read. Thanks for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
lovely and simply amazing :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

thank you! :)
lovely brevity again, well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
I felt warmth crawl on my skin as i read the lines. The way you write just gives life to even the simplest words. Amazing piece! Keep up! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Beautiful wording and magical feeling.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
A vary interesting write this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
I felt like I was kissing something that doesn't even exist - weird eh?
Cool (but hot coz Sun)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Simply superb personification, especially with something dear to me as the sun, (not this sun tho, a different one)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
pretty hot kiss.....mmmmm

lots of chapstick needed....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Shuchita

4 Years Ago

xD thank you
Hmm, not so taken with this one. I baulked a little at the pic to start with. Phps I am in a melancholic mood and would prefer the opposite to sun.

As I walked towards the dark,
It turned away,
Spurned my lips,
And burned my throat

Posted 4 Years Ago



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