Twilight

As I step under the sun,

I find hope.

As I step under the moon,

I find thoughts.

And somewhere between,

The sun setting and

Moon rising,

I find myself

Reviews

[Rebecca Leigh]

This has a clear and concise message; very well done

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Lexi Villanueva]

Its a cute piece. Keep writing

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[andrew mitchell]

I liked it and I hope you view my works soon too.:):)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Grey Evanescent]

I love it! The positiveness of each situations.
Just wow!

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful symbolic expressions!
wow!!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Ruth]

Ah, this is so beautiful! I love it...the in-between shades are meaningful :)

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so perfectly expressed...we are in there somewhere...that middle light.

j.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Giulia King]

I LOVE THIS POEM! You have a way with words! It's always perfection!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You've said it all. Why couldn't I think of it ? It was so good. Beautifully written with very deep and meaningful thoughts.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Michelle Rachel]

Hmm, I like it!! Good job!!

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^