Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Free Birdie
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The decisions of life.

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Oh the confusion
I can't come to a conclusion
Is it yes or is it no
I can't decide
I just don't know
How to pick a side
I have to make a decision
With precision
If I choose wrong
I won'y be certain for long
If im right
It can only be good
It would light up my night
Yes it would
Oh the confusion
I just can't come to a conclusion

© 2013 Free Birdie


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This is good! I like the rhyming so much it flows like a song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah, the rhyme scheme is fantastic. It really just flows along.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A well written and rhyming poem...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very good write! The only thing I would change is in the 10 line, you have written won'y instead of won't.
But thither then that! I loved it!
Keep up the good writing!
-Dragon
p.s. welcome to WritersCafe

Posted 10 Years Ago



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