Futile Minds

The world is an enemy,

All seems to be evil.

Evil in the name of god,

Isn't that blasphemy?

Why such monotony?

We are to rise,

against those endless tides,

Of agony...

Why so silent?

Such brilliant minds,

yet so stagnant.

Your eyes seem open wide,

Yet blind.

You are the reason,

for this infamy.

And this is what i call,

Blasphemy.

Stop this pugilism,

Be it atheism,

be it monotheism,

Or even a pantheon,

As i dont give a damn!

Why such monotony?

We are to rise,

against those endless tides,

Of agony...

Why so silent?

Such brilliant minds,

yet so stagnant.

Your search for peace would never end.

you would always return with a futile mind

Hence you come under-

MANKIND.

Author's Note

attempt is made on how incapable we humans have become.we fight for all da unnecessary things.religion especially.never have we understood the logic behind dis life.homicides,suicides,then we tend to blame god or say he doesnt exist!.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great expressed poem! A lt of people do blame God when in truth God didn't make the world turn out this way, the people who live in it has ruined his creation!

[Nonsense]

I'm assuming that this comes from anger inside of you? Almost like venting... It was vented well and I think you're right about how humans fight way too much over things that aren't worth fighting over at all. You showed that very clearly.
I'm a Christian tho, so I think you're wrong about blaming God or saying that he doesn't exist. The world has come to the place it is today because of everyone's actions, not because of God. Life is full of choices and we are put in front to make those decisions. Anyway, all in all, it was a very well expressed poem. Good job!

[MichelleClay]

This made me really think. 'Such brilliant minds, yet to stagnant' I couldn't agree more.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good anger expressed well my friend.

[sid......]

thanx a lot.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i totally agree, i think humans fight way too much, and over things that shouldn't be fought over in the first place.
this poem does show that very clearly! nicely done!

[Ecnelis]

Oooh! I like this. The repetition of the 2nd and 3rd stanza's at the end really wrap it up nicely. It all comes together quite well.

"Your eyes seem open wide,
Yet blind.
You are the reason,
for this infamy.
And this is what i call,
Blasphemy."

Great stanza. It is powerful and holds a lot of meaning. Great job!