FRIENDS

FRIENDS

A Poem by siddhi
"

about what are friends

"
friends are jewels,
of childhood days.
friends are those
with whom we play.

friends are sweet ,
friends are nice.
some are also,
somehow alike.

all fakes are there,
in time of pride.
but some are also there,
when we need them a wide.

friends like this ,
are actually the friends.
and we should always ,
care for them.

© 2015 siddhi


Author's Note

siddhi
please tell my mistakes.

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Wow.. amazing...and I enjoyed this piece..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Awesome poet on Friends. I remind my all friends those are worthy to me & so many contributions of them into my life to be what we are now. you refresh my memories. Thank you! :))))

Posted 4 Years Ago


Akki

4 Years Ago

hmm.. I have no any sense of poet but after reading your and some others poet of friends inspires me.. read more
siddhi

4 Years Ago

thanks to you
if you want any help contact me
Akki

4 Years Ago

Sure, I do!
Thank you, siddhi you are so sweet!
: )
Really liked it! You made it flow really well! Deserves all the points. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou tami

your frnd
siddhi
to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

Posted 4 Years Ago


The repetition helps it to flow well and it was an enjoyable read

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hello Siddhi. Very nice poem here. The repetition helps it to flow well and it was an enjoyable read. Only one suggestion. I think the last line should read "care for them" to be grammatically correct.
Keep up the good work. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


siddhi

5 Years Ago

Thankyou for your suggestion.
I think this is a beautiful piece of writing to begin pursuing your passion with! I look forward to seeing what new writing you have in store for us int he future. x

Posted 5 Years Ago


siddhi

5 Years Ago

thanks i will post new one soon

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Added on July 29, 2015
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siddhi
siddhi

delhi, India



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