Blank White Walls

A Poem by sidneywhitted

This is a song which I have written from a personal experience in a mental instiution. I havent finished, I just wanted some feedback for how I can improve.

Blank white walls
And bullet proof glass
Isolated from the home I used to know
Strange new faces
Slowly pacing
Making sure we suffocate in their shadow

Now I'm stuck here aching
To be released
Of the inevitable hell that's ahead of me
It's a dark black hole
Sucking in my soul
And I don't know when I'll gain control

Haunted past
Poisoned present
Yet somehow I'm supposed to heal
Somehow safe
Within the walls
But danger lies in the back of my skull

The storm's building up
And there's much left unsaid
This emotional tidal wave is too distressed
How can I fix
What's already broken?
How do I bring back what's dead?