Please do.

i am practically made to order

tell me how i should be

what i should wear

how i should act

that would best suit your needs

i am here to please my dear

my happiness?

do not concern yourself

my joy comes from your pleasure

smile more?

of course my dear

whatever you desire

do you see this blade

i will make sure that my smile is everlasting.

is there something else

that i could possibly improve

of course

my heart.

i will rip it out

and give it just to you

Reviews

[Blossom]

great poem. made me think about joker from batman. truly beautiful

[.SaveSydney!.]

Great poem!
Its actually really beautiful, yet simple...
I love it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was beautiful and it makes you think though. It makes you think because it is like asking do I have someone like that who loves me that much? I love the poem too. It was an amazing write. It is going into my favorites. :)

[Leanne Conway]

This is so beautiful, Amazing and breathtaking to me, I just love this poem.
Wonderfully done hon.

-Lea.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really really like the imagery I got from this. And this also reminds me of The Dark Knight(amazing movie, btw). But I like how it's a like...i don't know how to explain it, kind of "slave-like" because a slave will do whatever you tell them, wear whatever you tell them, say whatever you tell them to say...that's what I got from this and I really liked it. Great job!!!!!