The Girl

Fantasy

Girl, the day i saw you,

Were shining beneath the blue,

Smiling through your eyes,

I believed angels were true.

I looked upon your face,

Curls waved aside by the breeze with grace,          

You waited for the unexpected,

Unaware of the life's pace.

My gaze at you broken,

With rush of crowd through me a sudden,

When i came back for you,

Guess by the no.34 you were taken.

Behind the pacing bus i ran,

To let my eyes see you, the most it can,

But I missed what my heart sought for,

Cause life for me had other plan.

Never did I try to find,

You I had pushed to the back of my mind,

But i do smile when you run into my thoughts,

Deep down, my heart says you're one of a kind.

Author's Note

Open to suggestions

Reviews

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Haan maine suni pario ki kahani...waisa hi noor tera...chera hai tera ruhani...
Here first stanza reminds.me this wonderful song.....
But the wishes and confession at the last was splendid😊

Em, at the last line..is it Deep down?

[Vishal Singh]

yes the last line i noticed just now, hahaha.
Thanks a lot yaar, for the splendid remarks.

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You are welcomed!

[Adele]

i like your use of rhyming in this poem and the way u have expressed your thoughts. it has a lovely gentle feel to this poem and reads very well i enjoyed reading it it was pretty

[Vishal Singh]

Means a lot Adele . Thank you so much . Nice to hear you enjoyed.