Trees

Trees in the orchare

Laden with apples and pears

Picked when ripe

Oh what a treat

Bushels of sweetness

Live in my mind

So glad the farmer is kind

 

Reviews

[Steven Bilodeau]

This is a great poem, very short but that's what is so good about it. The point of a poem is to condense emotion and action into small words that explode in our (the readers) minds! Awesome use of nature, and the ambiguous nature of the farmer and mind. Good work.

[J.E. Stroud]

I'd recommend expanding on it

also

Trees in the orchare
should be orchard :)