Lonley Storm

Haiku time...

Ominous storm stalks

Mind on a life raft, deep sea

Vast, foreboding, help.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

You have such a knack for haiku's. I've never quite gotten into the style until reading some of yours. You describe so much in the tight laws provided. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing.

[Steve L.]

Yay!! It is quite difficult to express your thoughts with the constraints. Definitely a challenge. Thank you!