So High

So High

Over the GREEN water for life

Under the BLUE might sky

On the WHITE cruise of love 

That RED rose I hold

On my BROWN eyes in sunshine

With my GREY watch ticking time

Expressing my PINK feelings for love

With my intentions in WHITE you should know

I wish to fly with you so high

That nobody should be nearby

That nobody should be nearby

So

High

Oh really that high!

Author's Note

Sometimes you wish to be ALONE in love......
ALONE = YOU + YOUR LOVE (So high)
AB = A + B (Oh really that high!)

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Love the use of color for your adjectives in this lovely piece….each word is full of passion …..all equals a beautiful love tryst…expressing your feelings so perfectly … you are definitely high on love….” I wish to fly with you so high” yes alone in love is quite healthy as well
Warmly, B

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks B, I'm extremely sorry as I accidentally deleted your review while replying you back. This site is down at my side from last few days. Are you experiencing the same? And yes, thanks for your lovely and beautiful review. Yes, love sets you to fly higher 😇

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome, and yes trouble with the site today but I managed to re-write the review
read moreYou’re very welcome, and yes trouble with the site today but I managed to re-write the review
Warmly, B

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you so much! I appreciate your efforts :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Writergurl]

This is such a wonderful little write.
love the rhyme scheme

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks again :)

[Poetic Beauty]

It sounds like someone is thinking about someone they deeply loved be while sitting on a beach and they wish to be with the one they loved be away from prying eyes

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes the feelings shared in love! Thanks for understanding and review.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Amy R]

WOW,

I love this, a love so high will definitely feel like MAGIC.
Great write!!
-Amy

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Amy! When takes you over it will set you fly high ✈️

[Amy R]

Very true,
You're welcome...

[June bug]

This is amazing, I really enjoyed this write

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for your review!

[June bug]

not a problem

[kitty]

I feel the same very often...I could say I crave it. Have had the pleasure of walking alone with secret thoughts of a loved one being right there at my side...but then as the song says 'they call me a dreamer' well maybe I am. Alone and lost in thought can be very awe inspiring. Your pieces gives one food for thought. Thanks

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Better to be in dream world rather then to get lost in the cruelty of real world, now a days....
read moreBetter to be in dream world rather then to get lost in the cruelty of real world, now a days....
Good to know that I'm not a lone dreamer here....
Thanks Kat for visiting to my dreamland

[Chris Shaw]

A love poem without height restrictions. You are certainly aiming sky high here.

Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes you are correct Chris. Dreaming to sour high in the Sky!