It's a Confusing Thing, Life Is.
A Poem by Skylar Rose
It's terrible, really. The life we live. Fake. But perfect. It's wonderful, really. The dreams I once had. golden. But so far out of reach.
© 2015 Skylar Rose
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This is beautiful! I love how simple it is and how succinct the ideas are. Small, cogent sentences are sometimes the most powerful. Great style and I love how you use independent clauses and phrases as sentences of their own. It all builds and flows perfectly. The idea is also very deep and intellectually stimulating. Contrasting one subject in 2 different ways to get this poem. Very well done.
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This is beautiful! I love how simple it is and how succinct the ideas are. Small, cogent sentences are sometimes the most powerful. Great style and I love how you use independent clauses and phrases as sentences of their own. It all builds and flows perfectly. The idea is also very deep and intellectually stimulating. Contrasting one subject in 2 different ways to get this poem. Very well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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SO GOOD! HOW YOU COME UP WITH!??!?!?!?!?
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Added on December 10, 2015
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Skylar RoseBangor, ME
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Hello, my name is Skylar, but most people just call me Sky. I am a junior in high school, and I live in Maine. I love reading and writing and, most of all, being outside in the woods. I hope to go to .. more..
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