He says to never LET me GO.

He says to never LET me GO.

A Poem by S.L Vane

At first the Fresh feelings are hapiness,

You love a guy and yet in return the guy loves you too.

1st love is like a 1st lesson.

How to love.

How to cherish one another.

How to live as a couple.

Some people starts as friends, and yet in the end

they fall for their feelings.

 

Love is love.

That's it no need to explain through words.

Words cannot explain the feeling that you have.

 

I wonder...why can't words explain it all?!

while some other people can explain it through words?

 

We have encountered struggles

and some misunderstandings.

He says that he'll never let me go.

 

I needed him...but he ain't there...

I cried he wasn't there to comfort me...

I got sick and he ain't there by my side...

I am down and he always let me down...

 

Disappointment.

Doubt....

and felling alone.

 

Why does it have to be this way.

The fresh feelings become a shattered glass

that broke your feeling apart.

 

I feel sick and alone right now.

What can I say the word that he kept.

Is to let me GO. =(

© 2009 S.L Vane


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Thank you. ^_^ I really felt bad to those days he leave me alone whenever i needed him most. Such an arrogant guy he is. =(

Posted 16 Years Ago


First loves always are the strongest and the toughest. This reminded me of my first love--an illegal immigrant boy who had to leave because of his status. LOL. Such a beautiful, heartfelt yet truly sad message in this poem. I love it! Excellent poem! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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S.L Vane
S.L Vane

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A Poem by S.L Vane