Ahoy, matey

30/30

Plundering pirates ponder
Intensely about their next
Raid of the arrogant,
Average man; which
Closes a net; tighter
Yet, his misfortune eludes him

Reviews

[Dennis Wolf]

Seems like the world around operates in ways that it should not.. Of course, it's the people, not the world... Those who we would find utterly beaten at the end of a story, live and prosper without a care in the world, and those you'd sympathise with have it hard on them. Injustice?

Perhaps, but there is no justice in this world, none, save for impermanence
This one was an interesting read as well, though I don't really consider myself good with poetry interpretations or even creating it, but I do like to read.

Sorry for the essay long comment.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This poem eludes to and It says a lot about the current world events
Eg high rent high mortgage interest rates high fuel high food etc etc etc
The net is snared on the unknowing
That’s how I read it
Forgive me if I’m way off lol
Well done 👍

[Einstein Noodle]

i love pirates and stories of the High Seas ... read this twice and am left overwhelmingly with a mystery .. i can not ken it's meaning at all ... but i like it .. the consonance in L1 is milk tongue .. a delight just to say it out loud!
E.