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A Poem by Hello Hero
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Really old.

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01-11-04

 

I'm swimming in a sea

A sea of darkness

Come save me, come find me

I'm lost

 

I've been trying to swim to the surface

Ever since I unintentionally fell in

But it seems I will never float to the top

 

I can't breathe, I'm choking

I'm screaming inside

My eyes are clouded by black

Is this how it feels like to die?

 

Come save me....come find me...

I'm lost

© 2008 Hello Hero


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Wow, how frightening, but nicely written.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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