GREGARIOUSNESS A SHAM

GREGARIOUSNESS A SHAM

A Poem by JENY
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Solitude has its own value

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GREGARIOUSNESS A SHAM

 

If gregariousness is thy nature

Why you are a lonely creature?

In the crowd I saw you crying

While all others saw you laughing

 

One among the birds shoal

You follow your nearest pal

In the sky against the sun

You move as none

 

So many beaks in same aim

As if carried by same dream

So many wings in the same rhythm

As if fanning up same autumn

 

Autumn that smiles outside

Autumn that weeps inside.

Autumn that is noisy outside.

Autumn that is a frozen solitude

 

Cast away thy robes.

Admit thy souls

Gregariousness is for insecurity

Solitude is for eternity

 

My bird..

Escape, flew away from crowd.

Travel down to the dale of solitude

Dive deep into thy self.

Where you are you in your eternal self

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 JENY


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I loved this piece a lot, the imagery in it is so beautifully penned out.
"Autumn that smiles outside
Autumn that weeps inside.
Autumn that is noisy outside.
Autumn that is a frozen solitude " - Loved these lines the most, they are very deep and thoughtful.
A great piece it is

Posted 9 Years Ago


talking to yourself, I see

Posted 10 Years Ago


Definitely great. :)
nice choice of words. keep it up! :D.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem. I had to read the poem a few times.I like the story and the ending was very good. To escape into solitude is a need foe a lot of us. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2010
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JENY
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Kerala, Thrissur, India



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