FIRE OF IRE

Just a poem

FIRE OF IRE

 

Anger is the only gall

That can kill you, dear pal

It will plunder your health

It will eat your glory in stealth

 

When it comes, observe closely

Hold on to your reserves firmly

Never fight it with your might

Nor crush its strings that are tight

 

Ask your gifted rational ken.

Why there is anger in men

In the answer there will be a weapon

To conquer the anger, the stoic demon!!!

 

Whatever maybe the object of your anger

Your anger will give it nothing but suffer

It may plunge deep into pain..

But your hope to change it is vain

 

Nobody’s anger can change anything.

Anger is a weird sort of thing

If you try to change anything by ire

You will burn yourself in ire’s fire

 

 

Reviews

[Richard Williams]

Anger is indeed a bane. Some good lines, like "It will eat you glory in stealth." Perhaps on line (18) you could edit. Good job, keep writing.

[David W Moore III]

very cute way to say something very insightful. nicely done.

[joe shmo]

that is true! Anger causes so much distress in life and life become a strategic mess. It is better to be a positive person happy and joyful a cheery heart is like a good medicine:) Awesome poem!

[Dream Weaver]

How true!

[Ruth]

Anger is the ultimate downfall at times it would seem! Too many have anger poised and ready to fire, I know its not an easy emotion to handle but it never solves anything!
Great work
xx

[Ed Hart]

a lot of good stuff in here...anger is neither stuffed nor conquered; it is released, preferably to a mountain or an ocean, but the night sky will do