The Flaw of a Great Revolution

Revolution is the first step towards victory

It’s fought in two fronts:

 

The front of the ideal

And

The front of the “I”

 

To give birth to a child

Is the most miraculous act

It’s the revolution of the “I”

 

To bleed for the cause

Is the most magical act

It’s the revolution of the ideal

 

A son gives life

A revolution takes it

 

But death gives life

Childhood gives liberty

Giving birth earns maturity

And the act of living again gives wisdom

 

The union of both fronts guarantees gain

The separation of them, only promises loss.

 

You fight with your blood

Or

You fight for your blood.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"You fight with your blood
Or
You fight for your blood."
Revolution come in may forms. I believe violence lead to more violence. In our world peace had came without one death. Some places in the world been fighting for 5000 years. Poor kids are raised in blood and died in their own blood in the end. Real liberty is when men respect each other and children can live without fear. A outstanding poem. Open the door to a bigger conversation.
Coyote

[khalid]

a very nicely written poem......i like it

[Ashley Lynn]

Very strongly written. I just love the passion seeping from your words. Well done.