Love

Love is sometimes hard,

it can be like a game of cards.

You never know what move to make,

for some, what drug to take.

Like the words to a sad song,

you wonder what you are doing wrong.

When we made love, it was beyond and above.

Was I living in a dream,

so happy I wanted to scream.

Our many years, were so very dear.

In the blink of an eye,

I felt so hurt, all I did was cry.

It came to an end, we couldn't even be friends.

What could I do?

so lonely and blue.

Whatever I have to do,

still so in love with you.

Reviews

[JC Fox]

This poem almost makes me want to believe in love again, it was sweet and it was so true though, the wide range of emotions and feelings involved with love. Good job

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Was I living in a dream, so happy I wanted to scream.
There is always one line that speaks to me and, for this poem, this was it.
Good flow, good imagery...melancholy and beautiful at the same time! Good write.