cat love

cat love

A Poem by erika
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This is about all the good stuff about cats.

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cats are soft.
cats likes to cuddle.
cats likes to play all day.
cats likes to take cat naps.
cats likes bring in dead things and leave them so you will find them latter.
cats likes to sit in laps all day
cats likes catnip.
cats likes to purrrrr a lot.

© 2014 erika


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Short story shorter... Cats are awesome! (Except when they chew my headphones) ;(
Great ode to cats by the way

Posted 9 Years Ago


Got to love cats! Simple, but it works. And Maria offers some good advice

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hello. Your poem is short and sweet. I like where your going with it. You just need to make a few minor adjustments.
I would take out the ''likes'' /cats like to cuddle. cats like to play all day etc.
5th line add the word to/cats like to bring in.... same line ..later ,,not latter
hope that helps sweetie:)



Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2014
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erika
erika

berkeley, CA



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