no title

are you only concious of yourself? 

pushing me aside? 

but you notice him

he's not the one that cries....

he has no reason 

he treats the world as it is his own. 

he has no regard, 

or feeling of another

but there's you

are you to blind to see? 

are you really just that numb?  

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

Bravo. All the lines were tremondous except the last line.

[Sarah]

A nice poem of your frustrated feelings about someone. (= You should give it a title, though!