IndifferenceA Story by spopShort story depicting the reflections on a romance.She liked the smirk at the corner of his mouth when he
smiled. Unfortunately, apart from his pretty face, the words he spoke in
eloquent sentences were still disagreeable.
It was not a surprise; to find this courtship cut, abruptly. It was
displeasing, yes, but he said, himself that these things happen. Unfortunately,
she was not in the shape she envisioned. It did plague her mind, whether this
padded form would garner validation, for sex and romance, not purely
conversation. Ok, she knew sex was possible for most; appearances were often
overlooked once one was in need. The fact his thighs rubbed together, too,
comforted her. He was choking down pills for fueled fat-loss. Even though the
supplements were unnecessary, at least he made an effort. So, when they rolled
on the grass, at heat, thoughts were autonomous, saved from any self-consciousness
that would impair performance. To ruffle her hands in his hair, and
give tender kisses, they could release the timetabled tension. The leniency of
his soft hair was compensating for his lack of compassion in life, for he chose
contempt often, in his outward expressions. His tongue was shark in its
dismissals. He did not even consider; he expected response, he said, but did
not breathe a two-part conversation. He would then pause when her opinion was
indifferent. That was for computer games, surplus supplementation and mobile
phone specifics. He liked conversations the other player knew little about, to
exude his prowess " or ability to demonstrate prompt coherency at an uneven
topic that tires player two. He did not give to charitable
causes, with admirable words. He rejected their use. Any empathy was irrelevant
to his terms. Any “ism,” Marxism, feminism, veganism, was for brain-f***s,
blinded by bureaucratic beliefs. Yes, there was caring,
but he wanted to expand his knowledge on his self-interests. Very ambitious he
was, with ideas he did not sow. He was a conversationalist he said, not good
with written words. Yet, his discussions neglected asking; the absence of
consideration continued till all his said supplies were exhausted. Probably,
when he said he enjoyed her company, he was referring to the presence of
another body to practice on. He had said attraction was
unapparent, in his case. Asexual suggestions, she assumed, that were more
reasoned to played effects than what he felt. How can this be for someone with
a semi-masturbation addiction? For a particular porn-watcher, who prefers
hairless p*****s? Soon enough, he told her he was attracted to her, he
concluded, after he considered it. The subsequent meeting led to the grass stains.
He gives himself a Schizoid
self-diagnosis- for a guy who sought out social interactions, when alone. In actuality, she recognizes the confusion in
his evaluations. To know oneself is a challenge much greater than carelessly
generating hypotheses of others. He
groups and categorizes. Friendly smiles suggest eagerness to please.
Agreeability too. He says he’s not looking for anything. He questions
attraction, but contradicts himself the more they spend time together. It
doesn’t matter, now. None of it does. When he looked at his phone, as they
sat on the step to Reagent’s Park, she pressed her head on his shoulder, and he
pursed his lips against her head. She intertwined herself tightly into his arm,
into his physical strength. He was a keen squatter: he specifically set
gym-time to complete weighted squats, ambitious squats. When they met, he said he was to forgo all
sitting, for his health. Then when she later sat on a bench, he moved closer
and changed his mind, in the spirit of affection. She was often disappointed by what
he said, what he thought, but she still wanted him. He knew how to balance
passion and tenderness in one session; he could grab her hair, pull her closer,
with a rampant tongue, and yet, he would also purse his lips for tender pecks. They
were in-sync sexually. He had a useful tongue; shame, his fingers weren’t the
same. Perhaps she should have known when she saw his hands: stubby fingers, and
a childish grasp that did not know its way around kittens. Any reflection would foreshadow what
he came to be, to her. He showed what he was. She chose to seek the likeness,
even if it was in comparison to her younger self: life had let her outgrow the
antagonism and agitation of outperforming peers. His high school spite was
spoken of too often. He told her how he simply stopped his friendships. That’s
what he does. He preferred a social life centered on the unreliability of an
elder brother-to guide him, toy him. Leaving the park, they headed for
the nearest convenience store, with no true sense of direction. The tourist map
boards directed to the cultural highlights instead. He checked his phone once
more and led the way. After a fair few minutes, they weren’t sure. He asked a
passing lady, who offered too much thought and insight into simple directions.
That was sad, he said, offering such spare time to strangers. They continued; he congratulated himself, verbose,
along the way. Now that he was hungry, he spoke of his aptitude at finishing 50
per cent of a group’s food without anyone noticing: an art form, indeed. An apt
appetite for a growing mind, topped up with nootropics. Every morning, he would
refute regurgitation of the dozen of concoctions he spent the majority of his
money on. His room was a haven of eccentric gel pills and powders for gym
enthusiasts. He had said he was bent on personal development, when they met.
That ignited her interest, progress in the world starts with oneself. In
actuality, what she found was a child looking to argue any views, to better the
argument, and establish his dominance. Even he defined himself as brash, prone
to ramble and unclear. And he didn’t care about anyone. He was fascinated with magic. And body language. They
were fundamental to one another, of course. The subject must trust the
magician, or the illusion will crumble. From the beginning, she said she liked
surprises, and he was one. If he were unclear would that add mystery? Yet, even
this short courtship ended up agreeing with her intuition, his responses became
typical of his character: cut cold in theme, nothing about what he had to say
was in her interest. Except the general knowledge she could read up on. His
free will of opinion was callous. Still, he had spoken of his fundamental
depression, darkness he was only just emerging from. That left her empathetic. They found the corner shop. Bottled water: 2 liters
for £2.09. Too much, he said. Luckily, frugality was something they both
appreciated. They turned left outside the shop and continued walking down to a
main road. They crossed the street to find a selection of shops. £1.69. Not the
best, but it would suffice. They shared the bottle, and locked lips some more. The tube was approaching. “What do you think, about this?”
she said. He
looked at her, pensive. “We have to get on,” she continued, as they boarded. The
carriage was relatively packed, but they had enough space to stand. He was next
to the doors, whilst she faced him, holding the upper handle. “I
don’t know.” He said. “Do
you think we are compatible?” “I
enjoy spending time with you. I don’t know what I’m looking for. As I said, I’m
not too good with emotions. “ “I
mean, f you don’t tell me how you feel, I won’t know. I can’t guess what you’re
thinking.” “I’d
say I am not a very good romantic investment, but I think you should decide.
It’s a bad thing to say because it takes two, but you know. Indifference isn’t
a good thing for something which should be pure, wholehearted…either way, I
enjoy your company.” They
spoke in near whispers, to avoid eavesdroppers. Once they gazed at each other,
she noticed she had never seen that much emotion in his eyes before. Opening
his lips, he said: “Who knows? People are dynamic anyway. Just explaining why I
am a bad emotional investment: because I am prone to change, hopefully at
least.“ The
train had reached his station. Neither wanted the moment to end, or the
conversation to stop. He opened his arms to gesture for a hug. They held each
other for that moment. Her considerations classed it as one tender moment to
recall, as her journey continued. © 2014 spopAuthor's Note
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Added on July 22, 2014 Last Updated on July 22, 2014 Tags: romance, young love, teenagers, youth, love, break-up, short story |