swan

swan

A Poem by Solst Rapture

the sky
is blue

with bird bones
on the floor
and a mother
flying in circles


and a swan

swimming in the pond


© 2011 Solst Rapture


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This is a pretty poem. I particularly like the line: "floating past, playing the water like a fiddle."

One thing to remember is the difference between its and it's. Other than that, it's lovely.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've found your words. Lovely, lilting, floating kinds of words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 13, 2008
Last Updated on March 28, 2011


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Solst Rapture
Solst Rapture

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