Copper Infinity Ring

I bought a shiny copper infinity ring

They were selling two bucks a piece

I wore it on the wrong finger

I wore it as a reminder 

It's only a copper infinity ring

It's only a temporary little thing

I am young, I am free

I will find my true infinity

But then time passed

The copper's shine didn't last

In the end I was left with only a rusty little copper infinity ring

But it was supposed to be only a temporary little thing

Reviews

[Bear]

Nice soliloquy, I liked the hidden meanings within your poem, it also has an interesting rhyme sequence that I don't think I have seen before, was this planned or did it just work out that way? Thank you for sharing.

[dimmed-firefly]

Thank you, I originally intended to structure the poem in couplets but it just ended up being that way.