Beauty in being Broken.

Beauty in being Broken.

A Poem by sonnie ibadah
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The art of incompletion...

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There’s beauty in being broken.

Because it is only by realizing something is missing,

does it make what’s left meaningful.

 

There’s regret in words unspoken.

Because it is through the echoing silence,  

do you hear the answers that could have been.

 

There’s pain in memories forgotten.

Because it is in lingering absence,

that your heart aches to touch the unknown.

 

There’s peace in forgiveness.

It’s only after letting go,

do you feel the unbound lightness where resentment should have been.

 

There’s revenge in moving on.

Because it is through your walking away,

that they get to see all that you were.

 

There is bravery in making mistakes.

Because even loving wrong,

is better than the emptiness of not loving at all.

 

But...


There is no grace in falling apart,

Just like there is no power in breaking hearts.

Because as much as the falling tears wash away the pain,

the broken pieces will leave you void and vain.

© 2018 sonnie ibadah


Author's Note

sonnie ibadah
The art of incompletion

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To be honest, I didn't start out loving this. It felt a little bit cliche at first . . . especially becuz you start with the "standard" explanation of why it's necessary to have darkness to appreciate light. But as you go along, your arguments become more uniquely stated, so that you're presenting universal, relatable ideas, but doing it in a way that is fresh & unexpected. V5 is where your poem really catches fire becuz you have the courage to go WAY beyond the typical s**t said often about this topic . . . at this point in your poem you reach deeply into that part in each of us that feels vengeful . . . the part not so pretty . . . but very human & real. I understand a poem starting out with the recognizable points, but I love it when a poet quickly gets beyond the simple premise of a point being made & then digs down for details that really SHOW instead of tell (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sonnie ibadah

4 Years Ago

Hey Margie, thanks for the honest review. I'm glad you liked the ending :)



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"There is bravery in making mistakes.

Because even loving wrong,

is better than the emptiness of not loving at all."

Posted 4 Years Ago


"There’s beauty in being broken.

Because it is only by realizing something is missing"

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very thoughtful and well expressed. More wisdom to obtain and take away. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 4 Years Ago


sonnie ibadah

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Sami
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome Sonnie...
Deep! description of this poem in just one single word is deep!... addressing all aspects of life with great wisdom.. amazing work Sonnie!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sonnie ibadah

5 Years Ago

Thanks hun ;)
Nankya Yudaya

5 Years Ago

Anytime love

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Added on July 9, 2018
Last Updated on July 9, 2018
Tags: heartbreak, love, pain, beauty, broken

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sonnie ibadah
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