~Being Classy N***a!!

Be repulsive yet seductive

Don't be a bimbo,
Be a teasing tornado..
Catalysing his libido..

Though,be a lady with class,
Never shattering as a glass.
Be cool and calm,
Have a defiant charm..

Like a fire kindled..
Attracting moths..
Scathing them with
A killer look!!

Let 'em call you twin or crazy;
Hold your head as you walk baby!!

Author's Note

One of my girlfriends had a bit of insecurity regarding her look and personality.. i wrote this to boost her up.. Just a scribble. Hope you will like it.Fingers crossed. :) For a gonna be- killer in heels. ;)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Oh man oh man... you pushed all the buttons here, not sure 'repulsive' is as far as you wanna go, but I catch your drift Sophy, a little moxy goes a long way...kick up those stilettos!

...umm, N***a,
really, you're so not PC dear, why has no one mentioned it I wonder...brave world you live in gorgeous!! ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well you know need to have a bit of killer charm.Kicking in those heels ;) i was waiting for your review with this piece.I knew you woul like it;cause you are one of those"killer in stilletos" ★winks★..
Aww.. thank you so much N***a :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well you know need to have a bit of killer charm.Kicking in those heels ;) i was waiting for your review with this piece.I knew you woul like it;cause you are one of those"killer in stilletos" ★winks★..
Aww.. thank you so much N***a :)

[Frieda P]

I've been a bit slow on the uptake these days...but you knew I'd have something to say! ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I very nicely know your taste ;) and there is something smashing coming for you and six others.. ;) hope you will like it

[Frieda P]

Oh geez, should I be afraid? ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Umm... kinda yes ;) you should be excited... check it out after an hour or two.. It will be posted

[Frieda P]

I might need a nap first after all that cake last night. ;)

[raj24]

i loved it :)..n i feel your friend must have enjoyed it too..i liked the first line..dont be a bimbo, be a teasing tornado.....that was teasing..:) well written Sophy:)

Raj

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yepp... :) gracias Raj

[Edward Lancheister]

good provoking poem.

Let 'em call you twin or crazy;
Hold your head as you walk baby!!

those lines are my favorites. proud with ourself and being ourself

thanks for share

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thanks Edward.. Glad you liked it :)

[Tom]

Class with charisma, yea, that's the way to go!

Sound poetic advice, pertinently and purposefully penned Sophy!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow.. see who is back.Thanks Tom :)

[anne]

the selection of words here was marvellous....so beautifully written with an amazing title.....I like your all work dedicated and dealing with the wonderful community of woman.....don't ever want the woman to be weak and your feminist quality in your poems appeals to the bottom of my heart.......I loved the stanza.......Though,be a lady with class
Never shatter like a glass
Be cool and calm
Have a defiant charm......
I think all girls should read that.......there is power in your voice and let your words keep shining and so my woman......

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. i am humbled Anne. ;) thank you so much

[Matching Socks]

Great write Sophy!
Love the message here.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Ana .. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a really good scribble...again all the paradoxes...the contradiction---

like in the song, "she's a walking contradiction, partly fact and partly fiction"

but either way, she struts her stuff...a killer look and that killer burn to turn his world inside out.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ahh she ought to be a Gemini. Yep you pointed out rightly. :) thank you for your words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:)

i'm a gemini....

[Matching Socks]

Ha! So am I! :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. so we have got twin killers here. Not bad. Ha.. ;)

[Matching Socks]

Well, Jacob's the mean one. I'm the nice one.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well.. we need to wait for his reply.. ha... lets see how he defends himself or turns to be the scapegoat.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. He's not here. So must be guilty.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yea i guess.. he is now charged with the crime to be mean.. ;) hiding somewhere