Deicide

Deicide

A Poem by Soren

Oh that I was a bird, to fly above the rain

far above the storm or in the eye of a hurricane

or that I were a tree, deeply rooted in the ground

drawing strength from the earth, where endless nutrients abound


Lo, but I am a man, set in between

I change what I can, asking God to intervene

I hunt the bird for nourishment and cut wood to warm me

Is not God nothing more, than the bird and the tree?

© 2023 Soren


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Well, Soren, you could opt to fry the vegetation of the ground on a gas fire, but then you'd be committing terracide. Damned if you do, damned if you don't.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

Thanks John you are so right. I already thought of that some time ago and the only conclusion that I.. read more
I believe they are God's painting, and he is such an artist.
j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Soren

11 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob for the review and comment

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