Once upon

Once upon a star beam

in the gleam of a moon dream

I fancied unraveling

a silver cloud's seam

Pulling an argent thread

came sifting to my bed

fluttering about my head

butterflies of golden wishes spread

Rainbow dust

sparkles on the snow's crust

where spring's lust

as new life through ice is thrust

There sun's honey dripping

where sunbeam straws were sipping

Billowing clouds of cream whipping

a breeze kisses earth's chocolate dipping

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh how nature and the spring of new life can create such beautiful words and pictures within our brains. It can create such aww and wonder that bring joy and peace to our lives

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the review and most kind words.

[Betty Hermelee]

What a stunning dream… keep that one in mind….so many wondrous images, the best of course are the taste ones……cream whipping and chocolate dipping, yet I love the lines about a tender shoot popping out of the ice….and what you might find by unraveling a cloud’s seam…. It all fits together like a neat puzzle …thank you for sharing!
Warmly, B

[Soren]

Thanks so much Betty I appreciate the read and most kind comments. Yea food always seems to be high on peoples lists.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Chris Shaw]

You know I have a very sweet tooth Soren. A very tasty write and a reminder that spring has sprung. My mind wandered at the imagery. The season of renewal and rebirth. Beautiful stanzas. Your lines left a warm feeling in their wake.

Chris

[Soren]

Had to do it Chris the balance was too far on the sour side and needed a bit of sugar to make sweet and sour. Thanks for the review and kind words. Be sure to brush your teeth.

[Chris Shaw]

Ha ha. I will :)

[Neville]

this is so bloomin sweet .. a real mid morning treat or thereabouts .. now I gotta go floss again Neville :)

[Soren]

Thanks Neville mine are usually so dark and bitter that no one wants to take a bite so I thought I would try the other end of the spectrum. Thanks so much for the read and "sweet" words.

[Neville]

... my pleasure entirely .. N :)