Diamonds of reason

Diamonds of reason

A Poem by Soren

Sheen of silver shows no shadows of vampire love's reflection

All myth makes for romance in the dance of the blind mind of a child,

transparent rainbow shards, time discards, mirages buried in sand

Virgin lust as golden rust dissolves in dust where hope dies

Bleeding faith damned, slips onto trust's hand, diamonds of reason

© 2024 Soren


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The contrast between the ethereal and the gritty realities of life thought-provoking.

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Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for the review and comments they are deeply valued
A very deep and thought nourishing write my friend. Etched in the aesthetic content, I perceived these "diamonds of reason" to be a reckoner that reflects their sparkling light on this lost child, casting away infatuation and ignorance.

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Soren

1 Week Ago

I thank you most deeply for your review and insightful interpretation it is appreciated.
Tremendous flow. Excellent work.

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Soren

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much Thomas your comments are valued.

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