Fading into the Grey

A short poem

When I used to look around me
everything jumped at me so clearly
like words off the pages
or notes from my favorite melody

 

But experience seems to darken my veiw
can't seem to tell whats fake and what's true
I feel so freaking blind
I've no where to turn but to you

 

Things are so different now, or are they?
Since I found myself lost in this fray.
I feel so alone,
as I feel my life fading into grey.

 

I am wandering aimlessly into this night
lost inside myself, giving up this fight
I scream out in the darkness,
and there is not a soul by my side.

 

As I plunge deeper into this hellish abyss,
I finally sense hope, a break in the mist.
Then I feel you as you whisper three words...

Open your eyes

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Deep and emotional, yet inspiring, I love it

[Lady B]

Interesting read well done.