Lost control

Lost control

A Poem by sourabh sabharwal
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The way a human life proceeds.....

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When i was kid,
I fell from my bed,
and i lost control over my body.

I got a little youger,
I fell from my bike,
and i lost control over my balance.

I got younger,
I fell for a girl,
and i lost control over my heart.

Then i went for studies,
I was streaming with the flow,
and i lost control over my thoughts.

I became adult,
I had a mixture of my dreams and my responsibilities,
and i lost control over my targets.

Now i am here,Blunt and Bold,on my own.
Thinking about all what has happened is what i have no control over.

So again...I lost control..!!!

By : Sourabh Sabharwal

© 2010 sourabh sabharwal


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We never really have control over anything...interesting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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LOL...loved the idea, the concept..it works..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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