Open your eyes, sweetheart

Open your eyes, sweetheart

A Poem by Tahna

Open your eyes

 

Killing your self destruction

Breaking your self control

Realising your true dreams

Believing on what you can be

 

Sometimes its letting go- that lets you see

Now you know what life can offer thee-

 

Open your eyes my friend

Don’t you pretend?

Maybe life’s like rules you bend?

 

Don’t be so broken hearted or

Insecure,

Be you, be pure.

‘Cause life can’t always be sure

 

Believe in who you are

Inside you are a superstar

Open your eyes and you will see

The type of person you will be

© 2009 Tahna


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Good message to the one in question. Free your inner self, be true to yourself, excel to be all that you can be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome stuff dude, i really like the flow;

Posted 13 Years Ago


Two words LOVE IT!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very very beautiful poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 23, 2009

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Tahna
Tahna

New Zealand



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