I can only wonder why

I can only wonder why

A Poem by Tahna


I think about you all of the time
You won't leave from my mind
And when I see you there
I'm aware
I'm acting like a fool
Because I'm hoping you like me too.

I smile all the time
And I laugh at all your lame jokes
Won't you understand
That I want you to be my man?

I look into your eyes
Everyone can see I like you
But you're blind to this, I know
And I don't want you to go...

And I only wonder why
You won't kiss me late at night
Under the bright moonlight
And we could hold hands
As you walk me home
Cos there is nowhere else to go
We could blame our romance on the stars
As you heal all my scars
And we fall asleep in each others arms

And I wake
To find myself alone
And I can only wonder why

© 2011 Tahna


Author's Note

Tahna
I write poetry under the influence of SPUR OF THE MOMENT, it releases all emotions and turns them into poetry, If it's something great or not, Im not sure.
Spelling freaks: Ignore any spelling errors, please.

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Wow, interesting ending. Felt like I was awaken, suddenly!

Nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


again another explosive and in a strange way so innocent but also very erotic well done love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


You expressed your feelings so very well in this poem, i really can relate to this its one of the more honest poems i've read, nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love this
and everyday i ask myself these questions and say the same things in my heart and i think it is really hurting to feel like this to someone that is blind ...
great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you express your feeling , always did .... if its fiction or now it doesnt matter, I think its his loss

Yossi

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing. I loved the emotion and imagery you expressed in this write. Outstanding job. It's okay, I'm not a spelling freak but sometimes you write how you feel and it involves misspelled words. Excellent job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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