Lycathrope part 1

Her love will soon appear

 There once was a boy who lived in the forest with his grandad, but the little boy only come out at night. I wonder why?

 It all started on the night I turned 7 years old. It was time to go to bed mom said but I stayed up starring out the window when suddenly came a little boy  running out the forest across the street and walked up & down the streets. Then he stopped in front of my house; I opened my window and shouted out to him.

 “Hey, what you doing?” I asked but he only stared at me with glowing golden eyes that could pierce through you soul. Ever since then he never came back. I always wonder what had happened to him so since then I would take strolls through the woods. But every time it was a frailer, so I stopped going in the woods after trying multiple times.

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  Years past …… Junior year finally arrived. Carla {my best friend since that incident in second grade} came running towards my with arms ready for a hug but I dogged. ^.^

 “Hey Janie, how was your weekend?” she asked

 “Good I guess?” I replied

“ Ooooo, are you still looking for mystery boy?”

 “NO, I stopped that child fantasy years ago” I shouted and started to pout

“Come on you don’t have to pout” Carla explained as we departed to our class. We meet for lunch…..

“Hey how was your day so far?” Carla asked

“I don’t know” I said

“Why?”

“Because I had a rear felling in the last couple of periods” I replied

“Well, when you have that felling most of the time something goes wrong to others” she said  “But let’s hope it’s not me” Carla joked

 “Yeah” I tried to say but the bell rung for 4^th period.

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Rrrrriiinnnnggggg…… the bell rang to say hey schools over. I meet up with Carla by an old tree in front of the school. {umm,It cold }

 “Hey! “

“Hey thank god today went by fast”

“Yeah, did you find what that rear felling was?”

“No but will soon find out “

BEEP BEEP “looks like my rides here, you want a ride?” Carla asked

“Na, todays a good day to talk a walk”  I replied

“Ok well ttyl” Carla waved good bye and left {t’s a beautiful day for a stroll on the trail through the woods}

 Walking along the long white dirt road Janie found something …… a dark ash colored wolf with a long bloody gash along its side.

“Oohh, you poor thing” I said to the wolf while wrapping it in my coat and then I ran back home to get the wagon.[ hey don’t leave me here like this!!! HELP ME!!!!]I came back to find the wolf trying to get up but I caught it and put it on the wagon and walked slowly but fast back home.

Reviews

[PSYCHO-LOVE]

It gose from her point of view to the narrator. And I know of the grammer so just go with it until I get someone to look over it for me .

[Dark Waters]

There are some grammar mistakes, and I got kinda confused with the "long white dirt road Janie found something." Who's POV was that? But I'm liking it so far